Alone You Are Small

Hollow caves sit in my chest 
I shed a tear but you tell me “give it a rest”
I swallow the lump that forms in my throat 
I look around I’m somewhere remote.

With you in the shadows I am not safe 
Shovel in hand you’re digging my grave 
I sit straight up blank stare on my face 
No breaking down I’ll do this with grace 

You circle and circle and spit pure poison
Words trickle out but I don’t let the noise in 
I’m stoic as ever and let out a grin 
You scream in my face as if I have sinned 
Do as I’m told, then I’ll be skinned 

Down to the bone to redesign 
A shell of myself, but I’ll say I’m fine 
It’s a loneliness I can’t define. 
Alone in a castle, chained to a wall 
I want to run but then I stall 
Look at my bruises your words I recall 
“No one will save you, alone you are small.”

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Date: 11/1/2023 12:11:00 AM
Congrats! Thank you for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 10/17/2023 10:49:00 PM
“ It’s a loneliness I can’t define. Alone in a castle you chained to a wall ” whoa these lines and so much more that you’ve expressed here in such a soul hitting manner truly left me in awe! I felt this poem and i love your way with words, and rhymes! So creative! A poignant write that also has a powerful voice!
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