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Alone Without Light

Dark and late, no presence of light Wondering around as if without sight I'm walking alone down this straight dusty road Just me, my rifle, and this bearing load I can hear nothing; no chatter, no talking No children out playing, I'm nervous but keep walking This dirt, this sand, this Godforsaken heat I'm lonely, hungry and tired, I need to rest my feet I've made it to town, still there is no spark I've made it to town, and I'm still in the dark Hours seem to pass, I begin accepting my plight But back down that road I see a tiny spec of light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2016 1:06:00 PM
Susan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:49:00 PM
SUSAN, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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Date: 6/21/2012 6:26:00 PM
Thank you to everyone! This was my first poem, so I wasn't sure about what kind it was.
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Date: 6/16/2012 9:26:00 AM
nicely done Susan..this is a couplet...check out the resources section
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Date: 6/15/2012 12:09:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Susan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 11:53:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Susan ! Like your poem, you written well. - Thank you for sharing it - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/10/2012 8:40:00 PM
hope in that light at the end of the tunnel, Susan. Good ending.
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