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"alone To Hear"

Standing all alone, a tree falls and crashes down, alone and no sound...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:56:00 PM

Michael, deep ... pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2010 8:19:00 PM

Just like that old proverb, you've brought to life here. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2010 5:17:00 PM

Great descriptive Haiku my White Knight... awesome words as always.. enjoyed on this happy weekend with luv..my friend..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2010 3:17:00 PM

Just wonderful Michale, the silence of the heart sounds louder when one is all alone,, nice to read your poetry today,,,..Love LeeAnn

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 8/28/2010 2:39:00 PM

very nice enjoyed this one hope you are having a great weekend faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2010 12:36:00 PM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned..To reassure you that it did make a sound, I think that the crickets heard it fall, as did the squirrels, and all the birds..The falling was not in vain..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work and saying that you enjoyed it...Sara

Susan Mills

Date: 8/28/2010 10:31:00 AM

Clever haiku, my friend. Thanks for your comment on my poetry "A Tiny Room". Love, Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2010 10:00:00 AM

You have provided an answer to the age old question in your lovely senryu, Michael. I think it is the same when forgotten people die -- no sound is heard, no impact left. Great work! Love, Carolyn