"alone To Hear"

Standing all alone,
a tree falls and crashes down,
alone and no sound...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:56 PM
Michael, deep ... pd
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Just like that old proverb, you've brought to life here. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Great descriptive Haiku my White Knight... awesome words as always.. enjoyed on this happy weekend with luv..my friend..
A   Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Just wonderful Michale, the silence of the heart sounds louder when one is all alone,, nice to read your poetry today,,,..Love LeeAnn
Murphy Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 2:39 PM
very nice enjoyed this one hope you are having a great weekend faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..To reassure you that it did make a sound, I think that the crickets heard it fall, as did the squirrels, and all the birds..The falling was not in vain..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work and saying that you enjoyed it...Sara
Mills Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Clever haiku, my friend. Thanks for your comment on my poetry "A Tiny Room". Love, Susan
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August 28, 2010 at 10:00 AM
You have provided an answer to the age old question in your lovely senryu, Michael. I think it is the same when forgotten people die -- no sound is heard, no impact left. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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