Alone Or Alive

Dear Michael, sweet lover of ours... I'm always looking forward to new friends... leaving the old ones ...is what makes life more and more confusing... your words your breath.. swim within my inner thoughts... I know how it feels to be alone and alive at the same time.... it's a voice only I can feel and taste... luv...pd

This is a deep senryu Michael! I read it twice and going to read twice more lol!!

Intriging thought! :) Tanya

"Just a daydream in my night.." I just love that line MJF.. You got me smiling with your comment on the last one, it will only be you lol love & hugs CTH

I like where you are going with this thought of yours.. We should write a collab together soon.. Thanks for all your continued support and encouraging words ..your friend cory

is it bad breath? if so, I have some mints ;) very pensive piece - what made you think of it?

Small, but very well done....tomorrow never come.... take care of the day ! - huggs Anne-Lise :)

Hey Bronx Buddy, very cool my friend, I like a lot...David

Fantastic senryu duo, Michael! Just a daydream in my night...wow, what a great line! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

wow, what a stunning tanka, Michael. Love when you write like this!!

Wow the power of your words is exhilarating my friend! I am amazed at the depth of what you speak of! I've been there, oh yeah, I have! I've been deep, so I know it when I see it! Wow, Michael, I just love this incredible piece! Great Work!!