Alone Now

alone now.  swaying
shadow on the ground too crooked
for the sawmill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 12:39 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Johnny. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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December 4, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Johnny, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your haiku. love the image. Good haiku if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~
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December 2, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Great job great haiku!!!
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Very good haiku, Johnny. - // Anne-Lise :)
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December 2, 2012 at 1:27 PM
thank you, it's my first one.
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