Alone Is She Beside the Sea

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Andrea Dietrich.


As I missed the original contest, I am thankful for a few poets who let me know I could just find the picture with their poems they wrote on this same picture. Here is the beautiful picture my poem is based on:]

With waves of gold locks falling down
around her shoulders prettily,
a woman sits in a silk gown.
Alone is she beside the sea.

Deep longing in her starts to stir.
She sits, arms round bent knees as she
recalls his arms enwrapping her.
Alone is she beside the sea.

Out to the horizon, gazing,
she thinks of every memory
of him with her - so amazing!
Alone is she beside the sea.

As sure as she is that the tide
will rise, then fall, she knows that he
will never more be at her side.
Alone is she beside the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/15/2018 10:45:00 PM
Sad and beautiful Andrea! Congratulations on your wonderful win. The picture is so inspiring too. xxoo : )
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2018 1:42:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I did drop by with my congratulations but I forgot to leave a comment on the work. It is wonderful that you did get this excellent piece into Brian's contest. Deep, sad and longing, a poetic gem that sings to the heart. You have caught the picture perfectly, Andrea. Your words paint a living canvas. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX. Sorry about forgetting the comment. A fave by the way.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2018 9:03:00 AM
Hi Andrea, dropping by with my congratulations for your much deserved win in the contest. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2018 1:40:00 PM
This is lovely Andrea. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/8/2018 11:56:00 AM
A very heart-felt write, Andrea. I'm sure this would have done well in the original contest - congrats on your win in Brian's!! Regards, John.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/8/2018 5:28:00 AM
A beauty again, Andrea:)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2018 5:45:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea, glad to see your poem came through in Brian's contest. John
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2018 3:25:00 PM
This is lovely, Dre. It's perfect just the way it is but with that melancholy key line, I think it would also make a cool Quatern. Congrats on your win! LyLy xoxo
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2018 7:08:00 PM
Hmm, I tried it that way in my head but it does not work out in stanza three to do quatern. i also really dig that form as well. Glad you know about it.
Date: 11/7/2018 2:21:00 AM
"Alone beside the see" diving into bittersweet memories.. avid readers can her feel and identify with a soul for Love thirsty.. Honoured and delighted to read your outshining work of art Andrea.. Captivating and heartfelt! Deepest regards.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2018 2:12:00 AM
Lovely verse Andrea, I just managed to get in before it closed. I think we all captured her thoughts well. RE the pic, in my woman on the beach poem poem you'll find it and can copy it from there. Tom.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2018 7:03:00 PM
Sweet Andrea. Good luck in the contest. I think you have captured her mood poetically well.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2018 6:56:00 PM
The cruelty of being :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2018 4:52:00 PM
very touching, andrea! i also like the repetition at the end of each verse...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2018 4:40:00 PM
Well done, Andrea, looks like you got it in just under the wire. Best of luck. John
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2018 6:47:00 PM
I did not get it in on time. I fell asleep working on it last night and awoke to find the contest vanished. I can't even find the lovely picture to put with it but will enter it in Brian's contest and cross my fingers.
Date: 11/6/2018 4:34:00 PM
How close to the sea is she? one can sense so much sadness, here Andrea, love your poetry Andrea, one of the reason's i'm still here.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2018 6:47:00 PM
she is very close. I can't find the picture this is based on. But when the contest winners are announced , I will be able to capture the picture. I was too late to the contest
Date: 11/6/2018 3:19:00 PM
You painted that picture nicely in your words Andrea. The repeating line captures the essence. Best for a win.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2018 3:19:00 PM
The rhythmic blue beauty of your amazing poem rises and falls like sad ocean swells, Andrea. Her lost love melancholy is enlivened with gorgeous wistful imagery. Superb in every way and love the form! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter