Alone In a Room

Watching you exhale
My eyes welling up
Forever missed

By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 19, 2010 at 10:12 AM
very powerful for such few words! a last breath? well thats how i took it and it is beautiful.
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