Placed Fourth in : Oxymoron Poetry Contest of Nette Onclaud
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Alone in a Crowd Alone in a crowd at the shore With sea of faces in my fore, The roaring silence is so loud For soft noise I yearn in the crowd; A heavy lightness sways my mind As awakened dreams I can find, Yet bitter sweetness laps my tongue As loud hollow music is sung.
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