Alone But Crowded

To be alone in a bloody crowd, feeling of loss it is my shroud, but act another part and then, change your mood, be young again, and bloody laugh out loud, mood swings are allowed , im having one of them (me) who am i today and when??? Don re Therese Bacha 'Beauty Of A Sunset'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rutherford Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 12:40 PM
As always Don you have just the right words to make it beautiful and get a point across. Anne
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October 4, 2014 at 3:42 PM
nicely penned piece don really love how you drew it
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