Alone and Confused

Lost in this forest alone and confused,
wandering aimlessly searching my way;
seeking some comfort forever bemused,
darkness surrounds me and causes dismay.

Look to the heavens I can’t see the sky;
wonder right now if it’s day or it’s night.
Trudging along as the shrews pass me by;
have no direction and nothing seems right.

Gone is the gladness that I used to know;
life was so easy, I had not a care.
Missing the playgrounds were we used to go;
wondering why life just seems so unfair.

I will keep searching and looking for love,
though I am so lonely and feeling quite used.
I will keep praying for strength from above;
meanwhile I wander alone and confused.


March 8, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/21/2019 7:23:00 AM
Very powerful, John. I am the title of your Poem. Thank you for the reminder to look to God. In a lost space, Blessings, Panagiota
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/21/2019 7:32:00 AM
We all go through periods in life when we feel this way, Panagiota, but the sun will always shine a little brighter tomorrow. Stay strong my dear friend. John
Date: 3/13/2019 11:53:00 AM
Lovely, and wistful. Congratulations
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/13/2019 12:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandy.
Date: 3/12/2019 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poignant piece John. : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/12/2019 4:24:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, I appreciate it.
Date: 3/8/2019 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/8/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend.
Date: 3/8/2019 11:26:00 AM
Sometimes, the heart will hold this emotion close. The feeling of being Alone. But, you are never truly alone. Keep smiling my dear friend. :) Love is all around you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/8/2019 7:05:00 AM
Well expressed John. I hope you have a good day :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/8/2019 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, I hope you have a beautiful Friday as well.
Date: 3/8/2019 6:32:00 AM
we slow down tremendously as we age : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/8/2019 6:36:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughts, Sand, I appreciate it. John
Date: 3/8/2019 6:15:00 AM
One should never give up on finding love. Sooner or later we find. Maybe not in the form that we would like, but we do
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/8/2019 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Pixie, for your kind words. I appreciate it. John
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