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Alone and Abandoned

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I feel alone and abandoned, forsaken and forgotten, a cold, caged, empty castaway.

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 9:37:00 AM

Lewis, congratulations on your win!

Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/5/2016 9:00:00 PM

Thank you Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2016 3:25:00 PM

I like the way the feeling was emoted in this one. Congrats for the win.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/5/2016 9:00:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Eve Roper

Date: 4/1/2016 9:49:00 PM

Love your verse, Lewis, congratulations on your win!

Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/5/2016 8:59:00 PM

Thank you Eve

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 8:03:00 AM

When you write Lewis, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS

Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/5/2016 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for these kind words Hansteven, keep writing ur thoughts :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 1:37:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Lewis..

Lewis Raynes
Date: 4/5/2016 8:59:00 PM

Thank you Upma

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/31/2016 3:58:00 PM

Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/31/2016 5:21:00 PM

Thanks BL.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 2:33:00 AM

A sad situation that no one would ever want to find himself/herself in.... Congrats Lewis, for your placement with this line!!! ;-)

Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/31/2016 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Teddy, loved the image to work with on this contest. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 12:31:00 AM

Lewis, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/31/2016 5:23:00 PM

Thanks Linda, beautiful ideas you have for poetry :)