Alone Again

Cold rains, wet and weary... seeping through the sky,
spectres pass ’long side me... bent, with collars high,
my visions are invisible and no one sees me cry.

Minstrels of destruction... rapping at my door,
naked anvils aching... heavy hammers roar,
their monodies of emptiness pulse, bleeding through the floor.

House of cards collapsing... sagging walls of wax,
deuces in dissension... aces slip through cracks,
the Joker’s lost and lumbers by, alone, along the tracks.

Steeple steps dismantled... muted bells below,
ruins quake and tremble... frozen in the snow,
their pains implode within my brain while pale winds cruelly blow.

Prophets tumble temples... residues of tea
highways of no entrance... paths of destiny,
where phantoms haunt my nightmare dreams, tell tales of roaming free.

Foghorns moaning lonely... waves awash in sound
silver schooner sinking... swirling round and round,
at midnight’s stroke, the mainsail broke, and driftwood drifts aground.

Silent seas misshapen... moonbeams painted rum,
teaspoons sifting ashes... fingers cold and numb,
an incandescent candlestick’s impaled the sinking sun.

Smothered fires smoking... oceans filled with ice,
lightning lashing windows... blades from paradise,
like tongues of limpid laughter licking wounds of sacrifice.

Flowing fields of flowers... silent harmony,
rolling river reveries... washing to the sea,
my love, she was my daylight bliss, she once belonged to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kimathi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:57 AM
Congrats Terry, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 1:08 AM
You've about run the emotional gambit on this one to great effect, congratulations Terry...
Negron Flores Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:45 PM
Congratulations Terry on the placement of the contest
Koven Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:24 PM
My you are prolific! Powerful imagery and meaningful stanzas. Allan
Davis Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:58 PM
this is full of imagery, love, deepness, emotion, sadness and hopefulness. nice job
Scott Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 9:15 AM
came back to read your poem again mate nice write very good insight in to ones relationship thankyou for your comments on mine davidscott
Mac Donald Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 10:07 AM
A strong and profound write, Terry. You are a master of imagery; here you have excelled. A wistful and passionate piece; you bear your sensitive heart, Terry, I hope she reads this! Best wishes, Mikki
Alvez Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 4:21 AM
Oh My! How passionately your heart speaks here. A beautiful rendering, pouring and soaring to the heavens...Someone hears and cares! Cynthia
Scott Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 12:30 PM
DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY VERY ENCHANTING I LIKE THE METAPHORES A GOOD VISUALISATION THANKYOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MINE DSAVIDSCOTT
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Wowza Terry! Nice one-like Lisa-Marie said, nice imagery. Love the house of coll. cards part-nice!!!
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:32 PM
melancoly sombre sits, round my concious half of wit, but then im not awake, tom tit,(finch) and cold consumes the night, i think you got it write, when im awake a bit, id now admit, a poetry delight, of: ' Alone Again' Terry O'Leary Don
Horne Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 2:48 PM
awesome write indeed, my friend
Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 6:10 AM
A great write, my good friend! In fact, the word "fantastic" comes to mind! Kudos to you, Terry!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 11:42 PM
phenomenal poetry weaving a tapestry of depth Terry ..superb imagery enhances the essence luv .. so enjoyed ..
Culverhouse Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Mr. O'Leary, welcome to poetry soup from me to you! Do you have freckles? I picture you with them....
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 5:33 AM
This is a superb poem. written masterfully with such beautiful rhythm.
Wesley Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 3:03 PM
As usual, you weave your words with delicacy and imagination to give the reader a total experience. Always in awe Terry! Luv, Elizabeth
Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:28 AM
this is truly a spectacular poem, Terry, enjoyed.
Merryman Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 6:30 PM
Terry, I enjoyed reading this fantastic poem! Great imagery, rhyme and flow. Well done! Love, Kim
Bauer Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 2:55 PM
wow! this is a gorgeous poem! although it's very sad and poignant, the language and imagery are absolutely amazing. i also love the flow and the way it sounds when you read it. bravo!
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