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in this world so hard core no one does bother even when you are sore tell them ,they move farther and farther Your pains you only have to endure In good times around you many gather I'm a sensitive lot feel touchy , I'm moved by small things attention I've never sought open to what life brings To accept all that comes is what I was taught when the going gets tough, I wish I had wings only thing that greatly hurts It pains ,when people don't respond instead of helping remain on the outskirts cant say who will show a friendly bond No consoling words does anyone blurt Of a hug at such a time you are fond left alone to tackle your pain alone to handle whatever does bother all seek nothing but gain alone we carry on this is what I gather Of care some may feign Most are I'll affected n are there in fair weather.

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Date: 6/20/2017 1:56:00 PM
I enjoyed it reading, nice one.
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 6/20/2017 7:06:00 PM
thank u for liking it .Kindly take the trouble of reading few more .
Date: 6/20/2017 8:46:00 AM
Sadly this is often true, my friend. People prefer to be around happy people because it makes them feel happy. It takes a true friend to stick with you through the sad times. I like your poem, it reaches out to me. I hope everything is ok, dear, and if you need a friend, someone to listen, I'm here. Hugs
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 6/20/2017 7:03:00 PM
thank u for reviewing my work . I appreciate your offer of friendship .oh sadly so we cant hug as we are miles away .IM an Indian AND YOU?

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