Alone

in this world so hard core
no one does bother
even  when you are sore
tell them ,they move farther and farther
Your pains you only have to endure
In good times around you many gather

I'm a sensitive lot
feel touchy , I'm moved by small things
 attention  I've never sought
open to what life brings
To accept all that comes is  what I was taught
 when the going gets tough, I wish  I had wings

only thing that greatly hurts
 It  pains ,when people don't respond
instead of helping remain on the outskirts
cant say who will show a friendly bond
No consoling words does anyone blurt
Of a hug at such a time you are fond

left alone to tackle your  pain
alone to handle whatever does  bother
all seek nothing but gain
alone we carry on this is what I gather
Of care some may feign 
Most are I'll affected  n are there in fair  weather.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mohan Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 1:56 PM
I enjoyed it reading, nice one.
Talwar Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 7:06 PM
thank u for liking it .Kindly take the trouble of reading few more .
Teagan Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Sadly this is often true, my friend. People prefer to be around happy people because it makes them feel happy. It takes a true friend to stick with you through the sad times. I like your poem, it reaches out to me. I hope everything is ok, dear, and if you need a friend, someone to listen, I'm here. Hugs
Talwar Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 7:03 PM
thank u for reviewing my work . I appreciate your offer of friendship .oh sadly so we cant hug as we are miles away .IM an Indian AND YOU?
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