Alone

Here I am Alone Warm bed Alone Thinking Alone I cannot sleep Alone Confused,tired Alone Needing love Alone Wanting to hold,feel Alone Soon the morning will come Alone

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2019 8:56:00 PM

a heartfelt poem. I enjoyed this a lot, Roger.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/29/2019 12:14:00 PM

sadly beautiful... man needs company to live full, roger... huggs

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/30/2016 11:39:00 PM

It's so awful to be alone! only if you're writing...:D Well penned Roger..I think the form is always free verse for free writes..

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/26/2016 9:02:00 PM

Well written Roger

Roger Page
Date: 3/27/2016 1:08:00 PM

You are very kind. thank you x

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 2/21/2016 3:01:00 PM

You've captured what everyone has felt so powerfully and succinctly. Agreeing with Keith, the repitition drove the point home.

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 2/21/2016 8:20:00 AM

Alone is a lonely place to be. good poem.

Dave Timperley

Date: 2/18/2016 10:47:00 AM

Roger, After 45 years of togetherness, this is and always has been my greatest dread. God Bless your future. D.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 2/18/2016 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful poem of an author seeming to love solitude and in which ALONE live a world entire and actually need to give and offer tenderness. That kind of Francois Sagan-Bonjour Tristess. Congrat.

Walter Alter

Date: 2/17/2016 8:27:00 PM

Good mind state exposition. Like driving in a nail with "Alone". Poetry is very valid as an outcry. The poet sees and reports while most of humanity suffers in silence under a crushing existence. But if you are to keep your voice, you must find rescue. The humor of irony gets me through the night.

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 2/17/2016 7:05:00 PM

Brilliant use of repetition, fast paced and rhythmic, the end lines had a great impact too.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/17/2016 4:49:00 PM

The constant repetition is most effective, as are the short, clipped phrases. Loneliness can be a terrible burden. Well done Roger! Best wishes, Keith

Chrissie Morris Brady

Date: 2/17/2016 4:48:00 PM

Nice write

Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:34:00 PM

Hi Roger, this is deep. A sad feeling. Love SKAT