Alone

the lonely weed
struggles to survive
trapped in concrete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Adams Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Nice Haiku, Ijm seven. A classic picture of the will to survive.
Seven Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:21 PM
thank you for seeing such
A  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:32 PM
a terrible feeling, even for just a lonely weed. skat
Seven Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:23 PM
At least it is the only feeling for this lonely weed
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