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Alone

Feeling very alone at its finest, As my mind wanders not even the tiniest, Cant stand these feelings of doubt, when i could swear we will win out, keep me safe and worry free, Let my mind stop and let it be, How much can I ask to not be alone, As slowly my heart turns to stone, tell me you love me and be true, That you'll be there all the way through, Life is not worth having if I"m not with you, So please and ill tell you I love you too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/23/2014 4:25:00 AM
Feelings are expressed nicely with nice rhyme in your poem
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Date: 11/22/2014 11:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading the line life is not worth having if I'm not with you.Regards. -Safa
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Date: 11/17/2014 8:09:00 AM
Stirring words and tremendously emotional and raw off the cuff writing, whatever prompted this write, I feel it.
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:18:00 AM
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:11:00 AM
Hello, these word match the way i feel at this moment, I have tried to put my feelings down but never really liked the way it came out. Great work??
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