Alone

Who did I think
was waiting once
again around the
bend in the road?
this same path
he travelled
now waits 
for only
me



02/01/11
9:50 pm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Babcock Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 8:52 AM
I am not sure on this write. I am thinking that the path is your life - one you were meant to travel means you are travelling down to what waits ahead. I guess our destiny although we may see it differently we travel down the path set for us. God Bless Phyl
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 9:48 PM
I am not sure if I am interpreting it the way you meant it when you wrote it, but my way of thinking, yes, in the end, we are all alone, just as He was! Or it could be something else!! Anyway, I like it!
Austin Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 7:11 AM
I suppose there are several ways of reading this one - deja vu, past lives, prophesy. A mind bender, dear James. Love, Dave
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