Alone

It seems like I'm alone in this world that there's nobody else nobody to love me nobody to care about I'm so tired of acting trying to be somebody else I would like to go somewhere as far as I can get and to forget the pain I feel for the life I have right now I would like to be free as a bird without troubles to worrie about and to fly high in the sky but it's all just a thought so I said :"Oh my!" suppose I just have to dream cause without it,have the life meaning at all?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/27/2024 1:14:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 4:09:00 PM

katherine, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/20/2015 2:28:00 AM

Kathrine, Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2011 1:57:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too...good luck with luv..

Duncan Chappell

Date: 1/28/2011 6:16:00 PM

such true words excellent thank you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/28/2011 1:52:00 PM

You are right, Kathrine, dreams are necessary to get the meaning of life,

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 4:14:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kathrine. Please continue to share your poetry with us. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol