Alone

why do i always feel alone
even though people are all around
sometimes i feel so helpless
i feel like i might drown

no one really cares
if i live or die
i keep pushing on 
even though i dont know why

i know my faily loves me
and my children i feel im blessed
but life sometimes gets me down
somedays i just feel depressed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Slaughter Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Nice write on depression. Thanks for sharing.
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 5:27 PM
Very creative and interesting write on alone, debbie
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