Alone

A  bandoned as if we never happened
L  ove erased, that has left my heart blackened
O  nly me as you have departed
N  ow I sit here pondering why we started
E  mpty and alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 11, 2010 at 12:11 PM
alone is nothing but a saden thought of empty emotions. This is me when I was abndoned by my mother at 14. Alone and empty everyday, sad! sad ! sad!Enjoyed your acrostic,..p.d.
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September 24, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Captured the essence of alone in your Acrostic Mr. Hall ;-) you are not alone anymore
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September 23, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Sad write...Keep writing and the healing will come..Thanks for the encouraging comments left on my write about the Canopy Of Trees..Sara
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September 23, 2010 at 2:05 PM
this is the bad side of love, great writing. thank you, chuck
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