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Alone

Need to look around; For someone in the crowd. To look at me and see; What so achy? And always make me burn ; So bad no one really concern. Even if you try to live alone; Make sure that you will be easily blown. Tears by tears flooded; All I see faces in cold-blooded. “Save me please.” I cried; What I found people running and hide. Looking from side to side; Fog everywhere; I thought that I went blind. I tried to open my eyes so wide; “No one found.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2010 10:42:00 PM
A Powerful read. Roger
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Date: 6/5/2010 10:29:00 PM
sorry i meant Hanan
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Date: 6/5/2010 10:26:00 PM
A bit sad but well written thank you for sharing Hassan.
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:32:00 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Hanan. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:20:00 PM
Nice thoughts on isolation
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