Alone

Need to look around;
For someone in the crowd.
To look at me and see;
What so achy?
And always make me burn ;
So bad no one really concern.
Even if you try to live alone;
Make sure that you will be easily blown.
Tears by tears flooded; 
All I see faces in cold-blooded.
“Save me please.” I cried;
What I found people running and hide.
Looking from side to side;
Fog everywhere; I thought that I went blind.
 I tried to open my eyes so wide;
“No one found.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 6, 2010 at 10:42 PM
A Powerful read. Roger
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June 5, 2010 at 10:29 PM
sorry i meant Hanan
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June 5, 2010 at 10:26 PM
A bit sad but well written thank you for sharing Hassan.
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June 5, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Hanan. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 4, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Nice thoughts on isolation
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