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Alone

you fall in love your heart gets broken its like you just died your heart is just a black hole now wont let anybody love you again all alone your crying stop crying you look up and its a river you try not to think of him every, sound,word,reminds you of him

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/3/2010 7:32:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Tabitha! Falling in love you do take a risk and yes we get hurt, but you will heal! Tak care and thank you for your kind comment on my poem! I passed your message on to Linda-Marie Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:19:00 PM
a sad rememberance of myself... keep writing! ------Ell
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