Alone

you fall in love 
your heart gets broken 
its like you just died 
your heart is just a black hole now 
wont let anybody love you again
all alone your crying
stop crying you look up and its a river
you try not to think of him
every, sound,word,reminds 
you of him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 7:32 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Tabitha! Falling in love you do take a risk and yes we get hurt, but you will heal! Tak care and thank you for your kind comment on my poem! I passed your message on to Linda-Marie Peace and love, Audrey
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February 3, 2010 at 1:19 PM
a sad rememberance of myself... keep writing! ------Ell
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