Alone

The pain that hits the mind 
Gets more annoying 
Accompanied by physical 
Every moment gets weighty 
Each breath hard to take 
Yet something still wants to breathe
Is it the hope or dream that pulsates?
Go on thinking something or someone shall alleviate
Forgetting in pain one is alone
One is born in pain 
Grows in growing pain leaves in pain 
The beasts of double burden 
Move alone
Assuming, dreaming someone will hold 
The pain arrest 
Blow whiff of fresh air,
After cool breeze follows a storm
The chain never ends 
Tethering firmer to oneself
At times answers one finds within at others without  
So we go on till gripped firmer by another pain offshore
Each pain pricks
 Deeper than before
Time ticks and new pin pricks
The pincushion seems so full
But lo another prick
A few mental and others on flesh and blood
Hurting deeper than before
When yet attending a smarting wound another follows 
Each time look for benumbing
 A balm to smoothen and soothe
 Ones pain giving cares
No lasting help comes

We move ahead
 Pity can’t live free like birds or beasts

The braver bear all
 Act happy find ways to remain sane
Learning the thrt oliving ,
loving ,caring and sharing 
 Sensitiveof the lot may turn insane!
Lifeless and tearless    wait to go! 






amber

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/19/2016 9:31:00 PM
Hi Amber, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:50:00 AM
Amber, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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