Alone

Laying down in bed next to you,
I’ve never felt so far away.
Nothing left to say anymore,
Too much hurt in the way.

Even if i tried to forget everything,
I cant, my head has a mental block.
Everything you’ve done to me,
Every time you say “I did not!”

Your lies are the worst!  
You just can stop! 
You expect me to believe you?
Yeah, right!  Never! NOT!!!

It’s time we realize there’s nothing left,
And go our separate ways.
See for what it is...nothing anymore.
May as well, because i lay here...alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/4/2023 3:09:00 AM
It's been five years since I wrote this poem. I'm so blessed to be alive, today, after what this man put me through.
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Date: 11/22/2018 9:57:00 AM
Fine write Louise, good penning!, Blessings, Gordon
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Louise Arias
Date: 8/12/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thank you. I write the way I feel
Date: 11/22/2018 7:52:00 AM
Its a nice poem indeed
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Louise Arias
Date: 8/12/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thanku
Date: 11/22/2018 4:17:00 AM
Flirting! behind the night black !- did everything in black hole as big bang! but surrender in morn light as- I did not! /// interesting
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Louise Arias
Date: 8/12/2022 11:15:00 AM
What are you try to say?
Date: 9/9/2018 5:45:00 PM
Are you writing about Donald Trump? Aloha! Rico
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Louise Arias
Date: 9/12/2018 1:40:00 PM
Lol no. My x
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