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Laying down in bed next to you, I’ve never felt so far away. Nothing left to say anymore, Too much hurt in the way. Even if i tried to forget everything, I cant, my head has a mental block. Everything you’ve done to me, Every time you say “I did not!” Your lies are the worst! You just can stop! You expect me to believe you? Yeah, right! Never! NOT!!! It’s time we realize there’s nothing left, And go our separate ways. See for what it is...nothing anymore. May as well, because i lay here...alone.

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Date: 11/22/2018 9:57:00 AM
Fine write Louise, good penning!, Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 11/22/2018 7:52:00 AM
Its a nice poem indeed
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Date: 11/22/2018 4:17:00 AM
Flirting! behind the night black !- did everything in black hole as big bang! but surrender in morn light as- I did not! /// interesting
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Date: 9/9/2018 5:45:00 PM
Are you writing about Donald Trump? Aloha! Rico
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Louise Arias
Date: 9/12/2018 1:40:00 PM
Lol no. My x