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I was ready to go Ready to leave I knew no one would miss me Atleast that's what I believed But then something happened Something changed my mind You came into my life And I knew it wasn't my time You gave me a reason to stay A reason to live I was happy I had you I gave you everything I had to give You were there for me You gave me your heart I was glad we were together But then everything fell apart Now I'm all alone And no one's here to save me Atleast I had you for awhile I guess it wasn't meant to be Now I'm ready to leave this world I have said all my goodbye's All that is left for me to do now Is to lay down and close my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 7:32:00 AM
Good morning Cory. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:31:00 AM
Good morning Cory. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:51:00 AM
A sad and beautiful piece that also shows the power and ability of love to bring life and joy to a painful situation.
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Date: 8/16/2009 3:40:00 PM
very sad but very well done :)
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Date: 8/16/2009 2:29:00 PM
Interesting write, definately in the subject matter I enjoy. A love found bringing a reason for life and then it disappears.
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