Almost Fall

Cobalt blue roped clouds lie 'pon the sky
Reach down and touch the distant trees
One lone butterfly flitted by
On the cool August's morn's breeze

August will soon be ending
September will parade upon the scene
Life will mellow in the cool beginning
That season's change will forthwright bring  

Unfinished
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deschler Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 2:50 PM
I always enjoy the beautiful imagery that you put into your poems, Sara... This is very nice. I would love to read it again when it is finished!
Peranteau Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 9:07 AM
I seen this write posted the other day and knew It would excite me....it certainly has dear poet ! Weeee...g'me g'me some beauty....Autumn, lead me to Winters rugged! Awesome Sara...Can't wait to see the burgundy crimson and gold! Yeeeeha...have a blessed weekend....much love, james..P.S.....pile up dem leaves and throw the grand kids innnnn!
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August 27, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Awe, I want fall to happen already. :) Sara.A delightful poem to read... August, almost over.... Love this.. LINDA
Nunez Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 1:07 PM
It can stand on its own as it is. It's short but a reader feels what you wish to transmit. Should you still add to it, I will be happy to be back and read it again. hugs!
Fleming Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:30 PM
A nice start, Sara. Looking forward to reading the finished item. My very best regards to you...Cheers! :) john
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