Almost a Hallway

we both are in
the same time
zone but it's
like being in
a large room
where you
are by the
furthest
window
and i'm
all the
way on
the other
side near
the door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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January 28, 2020 at 10:04 AM
I really really like this one. So well crafted. Going into my faves. xomo
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January 28, 2020 at 7:07 PM
Oh wow. That s so exciting! Sweetness!
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January 28, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Maureen, but I just blurted it out. Come this Sunday I will be in Cartagena, Colombia meeting you know who. We are both excited but language is going to be interesting. Mi Espanol is muy mal as is her English lol. I think we'll be laughing a lot...
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