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Almost a Dizain

What if it were only seven? Or five? Are the rules so strict in heaven? Alive sparked with energetic jive tradition grooved in breast-fed mood believing not that bucks are food can cause a soul to wonder. The soul pursues that which is good and doesn't peacock squander. ~~~~~~~~~ Workin' on it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 9/4/2011 8:29:00 PM
Lovely creative write lovely Lady Nancy...if it's that strict in heaven people will be getting heaved love...old Jack
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Date: 9/4/2011 7:17:00 PM
Interesting Nancy...Is this a Dizain? Or is it as the title says...Almost a Dizain? Love the poem anyway it goes!!.....Oh I missed that last line, "working on it" that explains it all!! Sorry about that!
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