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Almost a Dizain

What if it were only seven?
Or five?
Are the rules so strict in heaven?
Alive
sparked with energetic jive
tradition grooved in breast-fed mood
believing not that bucks are food
can cause a soul to wonder.
The soul pursues that which is good
and doesn't peacock squander.

~~~~~~~~~

Workin' on it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/4/2011 8:29:00 PM
Lovely creative write lovely Lady Nancy...if it's that strict in heaven people will be getting heaved out...lol...with love...old Jack
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Date: 9/4/2011 7:17:00 PM
Interesting Nancy...Is this a Dizain? Or is it as the title says...Almost a Dizain? Love the poem anyway it goes!!.....Oh I missed that last line, "working on it" that explains it all!! Sorry about that!
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