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almond petal pall



barely pink blossoms
Vincent’s funeral blanket
lay atop his grave

Kathryn McLoughlin Collins 
July 26, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/30/2012 6:54:00 PM
"barely blossoms" just about choked me up while reading this one...understand completely this emotion...best to u, Kathryn...
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Date: 8/27/2012 11:21:00 AM
wow....beautiful!! I am reminded of those beautiful bouquets. and the floral smell.
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:24:00 PM
Poignant Haiku, excellently executed... Very nice in a sad sort of way... Terry (see Soup)
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:07:00 PM
beautiful but sad, my friend - I'm very sorry if you're writing about a real life bereavement x
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:23:00 AM
Ah! Lovely! Cynthia
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Date: 8/24/2012 7:48:00 PM
sad but nicely done,Kathryn
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Date: 8/23/2012 3:35:00 PM
Sad one..Sara
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Date: 8/22/2012 7:30:00 AM
Very good haiku, Kathryn - well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:45:00 AM
Vincent? What a marvelous HAIKU! so smoothly flowing with splendid imagery. Well done, Kathryn!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 8/11/2012 12:34:00 PM
Sad but beautiful images.
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