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Swim in fresh water... Surrender and you will float... Live life in this way...

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Date: 6/18/2011 1:58:00 PM
Great advice...liked it alot Jeff
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:40:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Darren. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:47:00 AM
Swimming and floating are a state of freedom for me and this reminds me of that. Love this poem!
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Date: 6/16/2011 10:19:00 PM
Maybe I am not good at surrendering .they say you can float on salt water, but when I tried it on the Great Salt Lake, I just sank!!
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