Allowing

Swim in fresh water...
Surrender and you will float...
Live life in this way...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Morehead Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Great advice...liked it alot Jeff
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 12:40 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Darren. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
Mesch Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Swimming and floating are a state of freedom for me and this reminds me of that. Love this poem!
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 10:19 PM
Maybe I am not good at surrendering .they say you can float on salt water, but when I tried it on the Great Salt Lake, I just sank!!
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