Notes About The Poem

Alliterating Awareness 

 

Sowing senseless seeds,

Reaps rotting repulsive rage:          

Ripping reasonings:-

 

Liberating love 

Healing hot hell’s heating hate:         

Plowed peace perfected 

 

Living lovely life,                                  

God’s graceful guidance given:

Fruitful faith flowing:-

 

 

 

 

 

ALLITERATING AWARENESS: A HAIKU TRIO

Alliterating Awareness 

Sowing senseless seeds,
Reaps rotting repulsive rage:           
Ripping reasonings:-

Liberating love, 
Healing hot hell’s heating hate:         
Plowed peace perfected 

Living lovely life,                                   
God’s graceful guidance given:
Fruitful faith flowing:-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 4:20 PM
Millard, this is a masterful haiku trio! Your commitment to both the traditional 5-7-5 syllable structure and the intense, driving alliteration across every line is incredibly impressive. I especially love the thematic and sonic journey here, moving from the harsh, biting consonants of rage in the first stanza into the soothing, flowing sounds of love and faith by the end. A beautifully crafted and deeply reflective piece.
Lowe Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 7:53 PM
In the onderful oneness of onement, thanks, Alison. I am so honored by your uplifting and inspiring feedback. Peace and Love, Millard (AKA, M'Lo).
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