Alley Ii

O' my truest love
In your eyes I lose myself
You are my soulmate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 3:00 PM
touching! Light & Love
Bird Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 8:13 PM
So beautiful and moving, in your eyes I lose myself, you are a true romantic Jeremiah. I am sure you made your precious Alley glow.
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May 14, 2009 at 11:56 AM
your poetry is a reflector of your beautiful heart---Alley is a lucky lady----charma
Goff Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 10:54 AM
really beautiful! Jeremiah...Jim
Neshat Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 2:47 PM
you should read this poem to her.
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May 13, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Romanticism at its' best with this one Jeremiah...Raul
Megens Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 1:48 PM
I HOPE SHE KNOWS HOW DEEP YOUR LOVE IS FOR HER
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