Allergy Pills Squirrelled Away

allergy pills all over the house
devoured by us for weather is louse
squirrelled away by a crazy small mouse
who is snoring away inside my red blouse
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Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Maybe he needs them, too. You know that mice can't just walk into a store to buy them. Enjoyed this cute read.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 1:08 AM
I had not thought of that, but you are correct, my friend.
Fields Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 10:19 PM
The poem has me grinning = with the, most warmest feeling inside = to cute for words = thank you for the smiles
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 12:06 AM
Thank you for stopping by Verlecia. I appreciate it.
Ashford Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 2:31 PM
You are good at this kind of nonsense poetry Maureen, its a great skill to have!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Eric, and Maureen thanks you too. Smile. Smile.
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 1:59 PM
Good one Caren! Besides a cold I sometimes get, I think I have gained an allergy to winter, it is strange lol
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Winter Storm is so bad here, they have named it Winter Jacob!
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Now that's a brave mouse, one unafraid of mountainous terrain. Thanks, Caren! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Truly BRAVE. Love the comment; one we could never make at school!
Adams Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 11:14 AM
cute poem...i suffer some allergies but can't take pills for them because they mess with my heart so i just deal with the allergies...hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Allergies are awful!
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Another clever poem, well penned Caren. Blessings, Jennifer.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Thank you my friend.
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Cute, same here
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 4:00 PM
I see you understand it well Eve.
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