Allergy

Itchy, watery eyes
Runny nose, sneezing, stuffy
Can't breathe rag weed blooms

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Hyle Chu

August 23, 2009 at 10:48 AM

Hate me. I don't have allergies. Want a hanky?

Mohammad Yamin

August 23, 2009 at 8:55 AM

Sara, This is a fantastic Haiku. What a vivid description of allergic conditions. I suffer from Allergy too. So far I have identified two items I am allergic from, banana and peanuts. Believe me, I am so much tempted to have them but can't. The after affects are dreadful. Thanks for your most encouraging comments on my Haiku, buried Hearts. Yes there are trillions of people buried where there are motorways of today and no one knows it. -Mohammad

Gert W. Knop

August 23, 2009 at 5:52 AM

Gosh, Sara, too many are suffering from allergies, me too, although it could be worse. Keep on with your good writing. Gert

Katherine Stella

August 23, 2009 at 5:06 AM

ahhhhhhhhhh choooooooo and bless you for this fantastic job me still smiling now where did someone put my kleenix lol great write sara you capture this right on the money my mom suffered bad from this I only get it when cotton wood trees bloom keep up the great work

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