Notes About The Poem

Image result for clipart image of person with allergies

Allergies Hit Early

red eyes
teary

itchy 
bleary

view is
dreary

feeling 
weary

dull and
drowsy

looking 
lousy

big loud
sneezes

Nature 
teases

strong pills
eyedrops

irksome
itch stops

no more
ACHOO’s~~

good-bye
to blues.


February 10, 2023

placed 4th   in Brian Strand's Contest 1185
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Ashley Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Oh yes, I know this irksome allergy all too well! The sniffly itchy season is right around the corner. Your marvelous footles capture the agonies of allergy season with vibrant verve. I just love your amazing footles, Janice. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Thanks so much, Susan! Janice
Agustin Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:44 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... health footles in your great poetic style. God bless you.
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Beata, thanks a million! Janice
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