Allergies

leaf’s’dust in the breeze….
 my loud unrelenting sneeze
 brings me to my knees

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Carol Sunshine Brown

October 20, 2010 at 10:45 AM

Good afternoon Robb. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 19, 2010 at 1:30 PM

OH I feel for u Robb if u have allergies to foliage.. one of my sons does too and the sneezes are unique luv... a grand piece to describe the feelings of those symptoms and your rhyme is perfect luv..