Alleluia

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Written - 7th December 2023 

 

 

 

Angels clustered Heavenly sky To tell the world Jesus was nigh They heard, in a stable forlorn Baby Jesus was being born. The Son of God, His Holy gift A new born King to us He gives And Joseph his sweet child he kissed His every prayer had been granted. Mary laid Jesus on the hay On that unique first Christmas Day Then knelt in thanks to God the Lord And promised to care for her ward. Bitter hearts that cannot find rest Souls that could not ever be blessed May glory and God's love run through God's will be done on earth to you. Never forsake the dear Lord's name For that would only produce shame You certainly wouldn't wish to find What was coming up from behind. To feel the love, to feel the touch Have faith in the heavenly crutch It's a celebration of joy Birth of a Holy baby boy. Alleluia!

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Date: 12/11/2023 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Alleluia" is a wonderful write. Love This One... Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/11/2023 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Paula, I’m pleased you liked the poem. Have a wonderful day writing away yourself…Belle
Date: 12/10/2023 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/11/2023 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Silent One… Belle
Date: 12/8/2023 5:28:00 AM
A magnificent poem for the season. Well penned, my friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/8/2023 6:37:00 AM
Thank you poet pal Jerry… Belle
Date: 12/8/2023 2:27:00 AM
A lovely poem about the season.. You captured the scene very well and as always your rhymes are great..
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/8/2023 3:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One, appreciated… Belle
Date: 12/7/2023 9:03:00 PM
You captured the true meaning of christmas Belle. Good luck in the contest. Tom What you doing up at this ungodly hour lol.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/7/2023 9:12:00 PM
Same as you Tom, can’t sleep. Thanks very much… Belle
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