Allegoric Spaceship

Spaceship !

You know that spaceship is related with
Alien, Moon, Planet, Star, Stun Gun...

You may be right or wrong
I don't want to know it !

Sometime my soul creates a spaceship
I enter into it from my room with happiness

I try to visit everywhere....Soul to soul...Soul to super soul...

I seek problematic truth, solvable truth, universal truth, real magic , ...

I want to reach into the black holes....The signal...


Some great poets, writers, artists, scientists, philosophers 
Are searching the destination
And living one place to another place on the space...

They are moving...They are enjoying...They are dieing...

I am observing them from the window of my spaceship !

One day my spaceship will be crashed on the space...

SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/14/2014 11:25:00 PM
REvisiting this nice one. Gosh, I don't see many posted since this time. HOpe you come up with a lot of new poems!!
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Date: 10/7/2014 12:58:00 PM
Sandip, I believe that I may have floated past you, during an OBE, one night...don't those rings of Saturn feel great when you pass through them? I enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 8/14/2014 11:39:00 PM
Wonderful n perfect for the contest Sandip! Congrats on merited fine win!
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:47:00 PM
Dropping again to congratulate you on a fine win, Sandip. Namaste
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Date: 6/11/2014 8:48:00 AM
I enjoy my spaceship, too. Great poem!
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:26:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Many Miles Away theme, congrats on a fine win,sandip
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Date: 4/7/2014 6:02:00 PM
SANDIP, Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you for sharing how far your distance goes. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/7/2014 10:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sandip, Thank you for entering my contest......Roger
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Date: 3/30/2014 11:10:00 AM
this was very clever how you got all the words into the writing at the very beginning and you made a profound statement out of the challenge.
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