Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

All Your Words and All Your Actions

All your words and all your actions,                                   you hurt me very much.                                                 What are to be my reactions,                                           no love your cold cold touch.   


I must forgive and love,                                                 Let it fly like a dove,                                                       I must love love above.  


Taken away by subtractions,                                           all your words and all your actions.  


Date Written:9/7/2021 

2 Place   

Forgive and love is so very important. Not always easy but must be done.  

Quietus-August 2021Contest Judged:10/2/2021  
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Christuraj Alex October 4, 2021 at 9:43 AM Though look angry, very beautiful lines. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith October 4, 2021 at 10:07 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. I am Not angry just very Hurt. I do not understand why people need to Hurt each other. Have a great/blessed day.................

Anitha Jayasankar October 3, 2021 at 7:19 AM So well said Paula... Congrats on your win.. Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith October 3, 2021 at 8:27 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Anitha Jayasankar September 9, 2021 at 3:38 AM Aww... so thoughtful... words of wisdom Paula... How important it is to forgive and forget those mistakes others do to us... isn't it... I have been thinking of visiting and reading your poems past three days..since I read your comment for my tribute poem...sorry. just didn't get enough time dear friend... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2021 at 8:15 AM Thanks for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, forgive and forget is the best thing to do but it can be hard. I say a prayer and that helps. I hope you are enjoying reading my writes. Many of them will make you smile/laugh. I love to give out smiles/laughs. Have a great/blessed day writing away............

JC Brul September 8, 2021 at 5:57 PM Time to move on dear Paula...You are right, time to love love above...That's the greatest love of all...Best wishes.. Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2021 at 8:08 AM Thanks for writing. You are so right, time to move on. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Tom Cunningham September 8, 2021 at 2:28 AM Not easy but you're right Paula. Hope your week is going well. Tom Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2021 at 8:07 AM Thanks for writing. Yes, not easy. Glad you like this one. I am OK~blessed. Hope you are OK~blessed. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Harry Horsman September 8, 2021 at 1:47 AM Great Poem, Paula, love the positive dialogue, and one thing for sure, is, you have a gift that of your poetry. Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2021 at 8:05 AM Thanks for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Delice Arleen Skelly September 7, 2021 at 10:21 PM Sometimes when hurt runs deep it's hard to be forgiving but I think that is the test Paula, we must rise above it...Delice Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2021 at 8:04 AM Thanks for writing. Yes, it is a test and we we must rise above. Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Marilene Evans September 7, 2021 at 5:16 PM You are right on Paula, love does the heart good and forgiveness is good for the soul. Life is too short, carrying a grudge is heavy and bad for your heart. Paula Goldsmith September 9, 2021 at 8:03 AM Thanks for writing. You are so right with what you said. Have a great/blessed day writing away............