All You Said Was a Lie

You said that you love me with your whole heart
But you never show it 
You said that you care about me
I bit you said that to make me feel batter
You said that you wanted to be with me forever
But your not your with some girl
You said you would make me happy 
But you made me full of woe
All you said was a lie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 25, 2010 at 10:46 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Laurie. Love, Carol
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February 24, 2010 at 8:23 PM
ALL GUY ARE LIKE THAT. UNTIL THEY GET CAUGHT. THAN YOU FIND OUT IF THEY REALLY LOVE YOU...LET THEM LEAVE SO WHAT...
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