All You Can Eat

I went to a place that serves all you can eat.
And now my new shoes do not fit on my feet.
My hat is too small now to fit on my head.
My legs are too long now to fit on my bed.
So if you should visit the very same place,
Take my advice, friend, and don’t stuff your face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 18, 2016 at 1:20 PM
enjoying this one a second time. Love SKAT
Pen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Too much of anything is "poisonous"
A  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:40 AM
ISSA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Hyler Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
Gibson Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I have found this to be a friendly community of poetry lovers; I hope that will be your experience as well. Jump in, write and enjoy! Ha ha! Nice humor.
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2014 at 7:45 PM
LOL very humourous write. Hugs Jan x
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May 10, 2014 at 4:03 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Issa :) - I choose your first well written rhyme poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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May 10, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Issa,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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