"all Will Pass"

We always say it will pass...
The pain will go, it won't last...

A mended heart not made of glass...
Stronger for the times, glad it passed...


For the "Pass" contest  Paula Swanson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/18/2010 5:41:00 PM
wonderful, Michael enjoyed your passed thru poem. have anice one, send you soup mail,..p.d.
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:02:00 PM
very nicely done, and good luck in the contest, Michael!
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:53:00 PM
A superior write my White Knight.. good luck in Paula's contest... I know u already read my "Crossing Over" poem.. it seemed to spark lots of attention ..even from the sponsor herself..luv.. touches home to all of us losing a loved one..good luck my friend .. your J.G. forever and ever...
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Date: 9/25/2010 3:10:00 PM
very nice write and so true good luck in the contest and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 9/25/2010 2:40:00 PM
Michael love your entry for the contest. It sure does heal with time hey. Some just take a little longer than others. Good luck for the contest. Hope you enjoyed the Golf today ;) love Wilma
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Date: 9/25/2010 2:22:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this very deserving write..Sara
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Date: 9/25/2010 12:37:00 PM
sometimes it pass, sometimes it stays, to me it always stays and comes viciously to take revange on my scars that where just healing... but you give me hopes up it's a good feeling..
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Date: 9/25/2010 5:10:00 AM
Sometimes it seems that the heart of glass remains shattered for a long time when we lose someone we love. But you are right, the pain does ease with time. Still, you can never forget people who have made such an impression on your life. Excellent entry for the "pass" contest, Michael. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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