All Things Norse

All Things Norse

The dark and dreary autumn skies
Illuminating moon amplifies
Shadowy figure arises 
Through the misty fog belies

Her falcon cloak wears a whirring sound
Absorbed by loves battleground 
Affliction blight of Niflheim
Embracing Freya’s willowy frame

This goddess walks through towering wheat, bittersweet
With grandeur attributes, beauty becomes deplete 
For about her neck clings Brisingamen of fire 
She knows the cost beloved husband was acquired

Odin’s ravens fly above divulge shiny blackened feathers
Hunting her walk upon the hills in steady measure
The moon sends its beams between darkened clouds
Reflecting her ebony ringlet hair abounds
 
Here in Folkvangr lives the field of host
Battle cries for mountainous ghosts 
Hnitborg holds the mead of poetry  
In mound of heights lives ancestry

And amber tears fill the alabaster jar
Until they reunite her to Odh

July 24, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Franceschini Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Thank u so much Skat. I've been missing so long with night school but hope to get back now. Again thank u. Hugs.
A  Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:41 PM
MARGARET, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Guzzi Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 2:40 PM
love Norse mythos, I think you could do a great job with my new contest give it a try? Light & Love
Franceschini Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 10:22 AM
thank you so much Debbie, I will give it a try. feeling overwhelmed by the world today, I needed your words hugs
Yvonne Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 3:59 PM
mythology my favorite topic. excellent thank you.
A   Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Margaret,, thank you for the reply
Nance Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Wonderful, you sure tell a great story! Awesome win!
Lindley Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:43 AM
A write that impresses me greatly. Huge congrats on writing this piece and your win!!
Guzzi Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 10:58 AM
I enjoyed this one very much, thank you! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Smith Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 8:08 AM
How wonderful... Big congrats...hugs Tim
Franceschini Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 8:12 AM
thank you Tim, my first ever, so happy. and thanks for the info on f/b soup. i will get in touch
A   Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Hello, Margret, I'm now just trying to get back to the soup. Enjoyed spotting this win, .. Congratulations. Linda
Franceschini Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 7:53 AM
thanks Linda, and for your encouragement!!
Hamilton Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 4:23 PM
truly a great poem Margaret full of depth congrats on win and ty for entering hugs
Franceschini Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 7:55 AM
and thank you Shadow for the contest, it really motivated me to study what I had in High School, LOL. and thanks for the information on poetry, hugs back
A   Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Hi Margeret, I'm good when it comes to Metaphors. I'm amazed, how well the rhymes played out. The flow, was deep for a rhyme poem. And That's What I Like! This reminds me and has the touch of, Edgar A. Poe. Dark and enchanting, at the same time. Excellent work, The first four lines is my favorite... Linda
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