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All Things Can Tempt Me

All things can tempt me from penning down my poem. And here I cram, how fool I am, jotting down them. A loud noise, from the neighbour's boys, or a party next door, The roadside park, where dogs bark, and cars honk more. The dashing beauty, hot and cutie, makes my heart soften. More often than not, the whistling pot, distracts me often. When the kids play, they make my day, I forget a line or two. My darling wife, all my life, made my rhythm flew. The parrot's call, frightens all, makes my mood sour, The quietest time, for rhythmic rhyme, is the midnight hour. @som

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Date: 3/18/2020 10:56:00 PM
We crave that quiet time with no distractions! Congratulations!
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Somdeb Banerjee
Date: 3/20/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thanks and congratulations Sam. :)
Date: 3/16/2020 12:42:00 PM
Hello Somdeb Banerjee, to rhyme it takes time to do. We need to concentrate to get this type of poem right. So we need to find a quite space to concentrate for creating for this type of poetry. Have a nic day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2020 6:19:00 PM
I need a little quiet to do a rhyme I have to concentrate on my words. When there is no quiet I work harder on my poem. This poem turned out very well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Somdeb Banerjee
Date: 3/16/2020 1:14:00 PM
Yes Darlene, but unfortunately in today's hectic schedule we don't quite get the quiet space or time. Just penned it down on my way back home. Stay safe. :)

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