All the Lonely Souls Need Love

He sat so bent and crooked on that bench
So sad to see it gave your heart a wrench

Wrapping his bony arms around his chest
The old man struggled,tried his very best

To fend off chills here on this dreary day
I sat with him and listened to him say

The words that trickled softly from his lips
In between the day old coffee sips

"My Belle and I we used to come to town
When we got tired we'd come here and sit down

This was our special place,we loved it so
We'd feed the birds and have a cup of joe

With arms around each other hold so tight
Until the afternoon turned into night

But now my Belle has left and gone above
Without her I have nobody to love"

With that he struggled up and walked away
I watched as he diminished in the day

So many lonely people in this world
If we could take a hand,our hearts unfurled

We might just ease their sorrow for awhile
All it would cost would maybe be a smile

So next time you see sad and empty eyes
Just take a minute,listen to their cries

It might enrich your life and give them hope
We all need someone's love to help us cope





* for John Heck's "Blink!" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Babcock Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 2:03 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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October 1, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Good luck in the contest and hey! home page feature....Congratulations on home page #1...Sara
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October 1, 2010 at 10:48 AM
This is a beautiful poem.It is lovely to read and arouses such emotion.You gave the old man so much life that I wanted to wrap my arms around him,I was so moved.I think loneliness would be the worst thing to suffer in life If only everyone felt the same as you as shown in your last two lines written from a loving heart,then alot of sadness would be erased from the world. Luv June(Sylvia)
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October 1, 2010 at 5:18 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week Deb love Jayne
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September 29, 2010 at 9:05 AM
DEB, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 29, 2010 at 8:52 AM
hello! Deb, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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September 28, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Fabulous touching couplet. Congrats on the feature. Vince
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September 28, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Deb, this is such a worthy poem for the Soup to feature this week. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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September 27, 2010 at 7:00 PM
amazing ... awesome!!!!! full of emotions ..
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September 27, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Hi Deb, coongrats on this entry being featured. This is such a sweet and caring poem. It is ironic that, just a few who are able to, see the need to give. A great awaking of the conciences. Mine as well. Thanks for your comments on my 'Anticipation'. Joy (Jew)
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September 27, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Deb. Love, Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Congrats Deb on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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September 24, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Hey Deb, I love this, love this. Everything about this poem is smoking hot. Love it, first poem I ever rated ... full 7
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September 24, 2010 at 6:12 AM
I some how missed this wonderful entry...very good and best of luck in contest..luv Michael
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September 23, 2010 at 11:40 PM
nice write,..p..d
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September 23, 2010 at 11:15 PM
A poem well done keep your fascinating poetry coming" Nathan
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September 21, 2010 at 7:28 PM
The story of this lonely old man is so moving, Deb. I'm sure he appreciated having someone who would listen to him. And you're so right about how a "smile" can make such a difference in a lonely person's day. What a terrific entry for John's contest! I don't think you need any wishes of luck to excel with this powerful poem. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Why the lonely souls? every soul needs love. enjoyed it, Deb
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September 21, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Super creative Deb.. good luck in John's contest... very deep and touching Couplet..luv..
Roberts Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:20 PM
beautiful, love it , good luck in the contest
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