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MEMORIES INSPIRED BY GARY'S MAGIC EYE link

toffee apples tasted so sweet candyfloss evaporating as we eat swing boats chair of planes & helter-skeltet again& again pretending to drive in dodgem cars flying carousel as if from mars crowding in the boxing tent local challengers quickly spent longing with youthful eyes rolling pennies for the prize sans parents at a local funfair evenings without a care

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Date: 9/5/2021 7:25:00 AM
Beautifully nostalgic poem with great rhythm and flow ~ lovely, Brian
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/6/2021 12:23:00 AM
Sparked by a soupmail chat with Gary..the memory awakened Line
Date: 9/4/2021 5:04:00 PM
I can hear the wonderful fairground music as your words awakened my inner child with sweet memories of those halcyon days. Loved your poem Brian ~ for a while I was that child again... with kindest thoughts Ann xx A fave too
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/5/2021 12:05:00 AM
Yes Ann,such a comfort sre happy memories.Thanks
Date: 9/3/2021 12:23:00 PM
"The happy highways where I went" Thank you Brian - a lovely 21st birthday present for my website :)
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Gary Radice
Date: 9/4/2021 1:54:00 AM
Hi Brian - I've sent you a Soup Mail Cheers - Gary
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/3/2021 2:44:00 PM
Gary,Your website took me back to childhood( again as I am wont to do).Happy days.Thank you.How (what ) got it started was it a millenium thing?
Date: 9/3/2021 10:40:00 AM
A "Wonderful" write with memories of the fun fair days. Toooooo bad we need to grow up. Have a blessed day.................
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/3/2021 11:20:00 AM
Yes Paula,but the memories stay indeible 'as is'
Date: 9/3/2021 9:54:00 AM
A light reminisce, Brian, well done!
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/3/2021 11:19:00 AM
Cheers James,happy days

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