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All That Tinsel

Colored lights draped over elaborate wire trees Festive wreaths dressed in ornaments to please Christmas songs piped in, one after another Outside a bell-ringer chirps, Merry Xmas, brother Yet nearly every guest room's empty Seems no one's checking in or out No line at the front desk either There's hardly a soul about... A hotel lobby's a lonely place Christmas Eve All that tinsel's a harlot's make-up, disbelieved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/31/2019 1:16:00 PM
I can see it. Your imagery was soundly and solidly in place almost the instant I began to read.
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Date: 12/31/2019 11:47:00 AM
Interesting Gershon. It appears no parties are planned there. Well done :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2019 12:45:00 PM
You're right - no parties planned there. Strange. Hadn't thought of that. Thanks, Heidi. Happy 2020! :) gw
Date: 12/30/2019 5:14:00 PM
And all this time I thought there was no room at the inn. : ) This was fun my friend.
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Date: 12/30/2019 6:41:00 PM
Hey, on Xmas you can always go 'out' to the 'inn!' :) Thanks, Chris!

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