All That Remains

The pain and the anger invading your heart
could be overwhelming and tear you apart.
You choke on emotion, you feel it arise,
It comes unrelenting to moisten the eyes.

Alone and bewildered, there’s no one at hand
to bring you some comfort, who would understand.
There are no illusions; you hope and you try
but when there’s no answer you ask only why.

You dwell on the sweetness of long tender kiss
the nights filled with passion and all that you miss
but now there is nothing to brighten your days
your heart still accuses in so many ways.

You should have stayed faithful; you should have confessed
Instead you were seen being kissed and caressed.
You pleaded for tender compassionate grace
But all that remains are these tears on your face.

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A Callman (Callus & Manassian) Collaboration
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Juman Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 11:04 AM
I feel the pain in this--- Nice my friends
Callus Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Al. Regards // paul
Williams Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 5:31 AM
What a great collaboration Paul and Eileen, a great depiction of the hurt one feels after being betrayed. Emotional and well written....Maria hugs
Callus Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thank you, Maria. I hope Eileen will stop by and read your lovely comments! // Looking forward to a new post by you:) Regards & Hugs // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Hello Paul, I hope you have recovered from your fall. Next time whatever you do be careful how you do things in order not to fall. Feel better soon. Regards: Darlene
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, Darlene for inquiring about my health; I will surely be more careful in future:) I have got over my mishap and aches & pains. Regards // paul
Turner Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:30 AM
That pretty much sums it up. In the vows one says, "forsaking all others" . Two of my favorite poets in one poem. Doesn't get much better than this, Paul and Eileen:)
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Thank you for your feedback and complimentary remarks, Danny. Hope Eileen will stop by to read them, too:) Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:25 AM
A great cautionary tale. Well expressed Paul.
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Richard. I totally agree with you...Eileen is the perfect collaborator! Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Eileen is the perfect collaborator when it comes to passionate writes.
Krampe Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 3:16 AM
Well done, both of you. Great depiction and lots of truth.
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Your visit and comments are appreciated, Agnes; thank you. Regards // paul
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Paul, a heartbreaking portrayal of the ramifications of betrayal and the ensuing ache of lost love.. A poignant collaboration with Eileen, with moving imagery of emotional regret and longing. The ink you mix produces impassioned results. Warmest wishes always and hugs, my friend.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Thank you, Susan; your insightful and complimentary comments are lovely and heartwarming, even though the topic is a sad one. ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend. // paul
Tripp Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Awww...so sad. A very emotional and well written collaboration.
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Glad you like it, Rhoda. Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 4:44 PM
A deeply moving piece, Bravo my friends, I hope to see 'Callman' collaborating many more times in the future :-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, Jan. The merit re 'Callman' is all Eileen's:) Hugs // paul
One Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 4:36 PM
A deeply emotive collaboration...
Callus Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 5:12 AM
Thank you for stopping by, S-1. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Well done, Paul..a story of heartbreak well illustrated.
Callus Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Thank you for appreciating our collaboration, Vijay. Best regards // paul
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Excellent poem! Very well written! :)
Callus Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Thank you for the 'excellent' comment, Heidi...and for being my first commenting visitor:) Regards // paul
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