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All That Jazz

Bright
Sun-light
Shimmering
On the water
Playing jazz non-stop
On stones of the river

Flowing crystal water
Honeycomb pebbles
Gliding under
Open mouths
Singing
Carps

13.8.2021
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury
Contest: Merse
PREMIER CONTEST: PLACED 8th

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/4/2021 9:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your "All that Jazz" write. I can see it all. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2021 11:16:00 AM

Jazzy and wonderfully fun Carol! Truly there is music everywhere if we but listen! Congratulations for your win. Blessings of music for you! Time to walk barefoot in a summer stream and listen for its melody. So glad to see this song on the winners list dear one.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/1/2021 3:51:00 AM

Ah, I never saw carps sing, but with all that jazz and great poetry, who can resist, I sure can't . Congrats on your win my dear, well deserved :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 11:29:00 AM

Lovely picture of butterflies and mums Rose. Congratulations on your win. I am sure all of the poets you left comments for are thrilled with your lovely comments. Blessings.

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/1/2021 4:01:00 AM

With their mouths open you can almost hear them :) Thanks dear Mystic Rose Rose....much love :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/31/2021 11:49:00 PM

This jazzy poem is a delight to read, Carol. It's striking imagery appeals to me, and to be honest, I'd have liked to see it placing much higher. ~ Congratulations! Warm regards // paul

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/1/2021 12:02:00 AM

Thanks dear Paul....I am so glad you liked it....all the love :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2021 7:42:00 PM

Dear Carol, I adore your beautiful poem and admire its wonderful title. This shining piece captures the ever changing improvisational beauty of Nature with brilliant finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/31/2021 9:35:00 PM

Thanks dear Susan...much love :)