Carol Mitra Poet Verse

All That Jazz

Bright
Sun-light
Shimmering
On the water
Playing jazz non-stop
On stones of the river

Flowing crystal water
Honeycomb pebbles
Gliding under
Open mouths
Singing
Carps

13.8.2021
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury
Contest: Merse
PREMIER CONTEST: PLACED 8th

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Paula Goldsmith September 4, 2021 at 9:01 AM Congratulations on your win. I love your "All that Jazz" write. I can see it all. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Sam Kauffman September 1, 2021 at 11:16 AM Jazzy and wonderfully fun Carol! Truly there is music everywhere if we but listen! Congratulations for your win. Blessings of music for you! Time to walk barefoot in a summer stream and listen for its melody. So glad to see this song on the winners list dear one.

Mystic Rose Rose September 1, 2021 at 3:51 AM Ah, I never saw carps sing, but with all that jazz and great poetry, who can resist, I sure can't . Congrats on your win my dear, well deserved :) Sam Kauffman September 1, 2021 at 11:29 AM Lovely picture of butterflies and mums Rose. Congratulations on your win. I am sure all of the poets you left comments for are thrilled with your lovely comments. Blessings. Carol Mitra September 1, 2021 at 4:01 AM With their mouths open you can almost hear them :) Thanks dear Mystic Rose Rose....much love :)

Paul Callus August 31, 2021 at 11:49 PM This jazzy poem is a delight to read, Carol. It's striking imagery appeals to me, and to be honest, I'd have liked to see it placing much higher. ~ Congratulations! Warm regards // paul Carol Mitra September 1, 2021 at 12:02 AM Thanks dear Paul....I am so glad you liked it....all the love :)

Susan Ashley August 31, 2021 at 7:42 PM Dear Carol, I adore your beautiful poem and admire its wonderful title. This shining piece captures the ever changing improvisational beauty of Nature with brilliant finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan Carol Mitra August 31, 2021 at 9:35 PM Thanks dear Susan...much love :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 31, 2021 at 4:25 PM Congratulations, Carol, on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala Carol Mitra August 31, 2021 at 7:27 PM Thank you Mala for this opportunity to write a new form of poetry,I love challenges....much love to you :)