all soldiers are terrible
Soldiers are terrible the young boy was told
Wizened and angry, their faces scared and old
But he met a young soldier named Tommy Lee
He gave lessons in life, hope, and a bit of candy
So the boy no longer believed all soldiers were bad
This optimistic ray of sun reminded him of his dad.
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